Volume 6, Number 1 (1997)
An Argument for
Nonadversarial Argumentation: On the Relevance of the Feminist Critique of
Academic Discourse to L2 Writing Pedagogy
DIANE D. BELCHER
The Ohio State University
The feminist critique of
academic discourse has begun to heighten awareness of the agonistic,
competitive nature of much academic writing in English. This article
considers what the implications of this gendered discoursal consciousness
may be for L2 writing educators, both as teachers and as academic writers
themselves. Vignettes of two L2 writers who have successfully negotiated
nonadversarial academic texts are presented and discussed. Finally,
guideposts for a nonadversarial model of academic discourse are suggested.
Dictionary Use by EFL
Writers: What Really Happens?
KIEL CHRISTIANSON
University of Aizu
All of the words that 51
Japanese EFL university students had looked up in their dictionaries were
identified in a 41 ,024-word corpus of student writing. Forty-two percent
of these "dictionary words" were found to have been used incorrectly in
some way. An analysis of the errors themselves and of interviews with more
and less successful dictionary users was conducted in an attempt to better
understand why these errors were committed and what can be done to assist
students in avoiding such errors. The findings indicate that successful
dictionary users, regardless of their level of English proficiency, employ
a variety of sophisticated look-up strategies. Furthermore, this research
brings into question some of the claims of previous studies into FL
dictionary use.
Contrastive Rhetoric in Context: A Dynamic Model of L2
Writing
PAUL KEI MATSUDA
Purdue University
The notion of contrastive
rhetoric was first proposed as a pedagogical solution to the problem of L2
organization, and the subsequent development in research has generated,
among other valuable insights, three explanations for the organizational
structures of L2 texts, including linguistic, cultural, and educational
explanations. However, the contribution of contrastive rhetoric to the
teaching of ESL writing has been limited because of the underlying
assumptions that have guided the early pedagogical approaches. This study
identifies a static theory of L2 writing that has been widely used in
teaching organizational structures and considers how the pedagogical
application of insights from contrastive rhetoric studies have been
limited by this theory. To overcome the limitations of the static theory,
an alternative model of L2 writing is proposed, and its implications for
further research and the teaching of L2 writing are discussed.
The Etiology of Poor
Second Language Writing: The Influence of Perceived Teacher Preferences on
Second Language Revision Strategies
GRAEME K. PORTE
University of Granada
Much previous L2 writing
research has sought to compare the so-called "skilled" and "unskilled"
writer, suggesting that one of the major differences between them may lie
in their respective approaches to revision. Specifically, unskilled
writers have been seen to revise from a narrow outlook and make changes
addressing the surface grammatical structure of compositions, usually at
the level of the word, rather than deeper issues of content and
organization. However, the issue of what may lead unskilled writers to
concentrate more on certain aspects in their revision remains unexplored.
Specifically, we have little information about how underachieving EFL
writers perceive the act of revision in academic writing contexts, and we
remain unaware of the possible effect of these opinions and contexts on
their revision strategies. This descriptive study focuses on what was
revealed from semistructured interviews over a 9-month period with 71
underachieving EFL undergraduates about their attitudes toward revision
and the possible effects of perceived teacher preferences in methodology,
feedback, and evaluation on revision strategies. The majority of
participants were able to reflect on their revision behavior and describe
their current revision strategies, which were often observed to be
pragmatically based and derived from perceived teacher preferences in past
or present classroom practice and from feedback on writing. Revision of
compositions was generally described as involving little more than a
proofreading exercise. Evidence was found that local teaching strategies
and evaluatory procedures might reinforce these pragmatic, yet ultimately
restrictive, revision practices. As a result of these findings,
suggestions are made with regard to revision strategy training with
underachieving learners.
Volume 6, Number 2
(1997)
Acquiring Disciplinary
Literacy: A Social-Cognitive Analysis of Text Production and Learning among
Iranian Graduate Students of Education
ABDOLMEHDI RIAZI
Shiraz University, Iran
The problem addressed by
this study was: how do non-native speakers of English acquire
domain-specific literacy suitable to their academic discipline in a
graduate program? The participants were four (one female and three male)
Iranian doctoral students of education in their second year of residency.
To investigate the problem, I used a naturalistic qualitative approach,
collecting data from four participants through questionnaires, interviews
(structured, unstructured, and text-based), written documents (texts
produced by the participants, their professors' feedback on the papers,
and course outlines), and process logs. I followed the participants
through their graduate seminars over a period of five months as they were
preparing for and performing assigned academic writing tasks in their
second language (L2), English. Weekly face-to-face interviews focusing on
participants' behaviours, decisions, and concerns were the central data
gathering method for the study. This study adds to the literature that
suggests that achieving disciplinary literacy in an L2 in a graduate
program such as education is fundamentally an interactive social-cognitive
process in that production of the texts required extensive interaction
between the individual's cognitive processes and social/contextual factors
in different ways.
The Impact of Writer
Nationality on Mainstream Teachers' Judgments of Composition Quality
DONALD L. RUBIN
University of Georgia
MELANIE WILLIAMS-JAMES
Texas Department of Health
Teachers' evaluations of
student writing are susceptible to the influence of extraneous factors,
including stereotyped expectations based on students' ethnolinguistic
identities. Even teachers' detection of surface errors in student writing
is vulnerable to such expectancy sets. Non-native speakers of English
(NNSs) who exit sheltered ESL classes may therefore be subjected to unduly
negative evaluations due to mainstream teachers' negative expectations. On
the other hand, it is possible that mainstream teachers overcompensate and
are especially lenient with NNSs. The present study attributed fabricated
student identities to a standard set of essays into which specific errors
had been intruded. The fictional students were either Southeast Asian,
Northern European, or U.S. native English speakers (NESs). Mainstream
composition teachers evaluated the writing samples using rating scales,
and they also wrote marginal comments and signs. Analyses indicated an
advantage favoring the Asian writers over the NES writers in ratings of
overall composition quality. No differences in the number of errors
detected for each writer nationality were found. On the other hand,
teachers' ratings of NNS writing were best predicted by the number of
surface errors they detected. Ratings of NES writing, in contrast, were
justified by marginal notations and comments; teachers tended to write
longer comments when they judged the writing to be poor. The significance
of the study is to enjoin composition teachers to reflect on their
differential dependence on surface error when evaluating NES and NNS
writing.
Teacher Commentary on
Student Writing: Descriptions & Implications
DANA R. FERRIS
California State University, Sacramento
SUSAN PEZONE
American River College
CATHY R. TADE
Winters High School
SHAREE TINTI
Sacramento City College
Teacher response to
student writing is a vital, though neglected, aspect of L2 composition
research. The present study adds to the previous research through the
development and implementation of an original analysis model, designed to
examine both the pragmatic aims and the linguistic forms of teachers'
written commentary. This model was used in the examination of over 1500
teacher comments written on a sample of III essay first drafts by 47
advanced ESL university students. It was found that the teacher changed
her responding strategies over the course of two semesters, that she
provided different types of commentary on various genres of writing
assignments, that the amount of her feedback decreased as the term
progressed, and that she responded somewhat differently to students of
varying ability levels. The study raises several implications for L2
writing instruction as well as for analyses of teacher commentary.
Qualification and
Certainty in L1 and L2 Students' Writing
KEN HYLAND
City University of Hong Kong
JOHN MILTON
Hong Kong University of Science and Technology
A major problem for second
language students writing academic essays in English is to convey
statements with an appropriate degree of doubt and certainty. Such
epistemic comments are crucial to academic writing where authors have to
distinguish opinion from fact and evaluate their assertions in acceptable
and persuasive ways. Despite its importance however, we know little about
how second language writers present assertions in their writing and we
often measure their attempts to master appropriate forms against the work
of expert writers. Based on a corpus of one million words, this paper
compares the expression of doubt and certainty in the examination scripts
of 900 Cantonese speaking school leavers writing in English with those of
770 British learners of similar age and educational level. A detailed
analysis of the texts reveals that these L2 writers differ significantly
from the NSs in relying on a more limited range of items, offering
stronger commitments, and exhibiting greater problems in conveying a
precise degree of certainty. The authors highlight a number of issues
raised by the research and make some pedagogical suggestions for
developing competence in this important pragmatic area.
Volume 6, Number 3
(1997)
Traditional Chinese Text
Structures and Their Influence on the Writing in Chinese and English of
Contemporary Mainland Chinese Students
ANDY KIRKPATRICK
Centre for International English, Curtin University of Technology
It has been argued that
traditional Chinese text structures, in particular the four-part
qi-cheng-zhuan-he and the ha gu wen (eight-legged essay) structures
continue to influence the written English of Chinese students. In this
article, the origins of these two traditional Chinese text structures will
be described and examples of them given. In considering their influence
upon the contemporary writing of mainland Chinese students, it will be
argued that, as these structures do not influence the writing in Chinese
of these students, they are unlikely to exert a great influence upon their
writing in English. A survey of contemporary Chinese textbooks on
composition suggests that the prescriptive advice given in these texts
reflects contemporary " Anglo-American" rhetorical style more than
traditional Chinese style.
Student Annotations: What
NNS and NS University Students Say About Their Own Writing
NEOMY STORCH
JOANNA T APPER
University of Melbourne
Although teacher feedback
has long been considered an integral part of developing students' writing,
seeking student perceptions of their own writing is equally important. The
articulation of such perceptions assists students to be independent
learners and also guides teacher feedback. One way to gain insights into
student perceptions is to invite them to make annotations on their own
work before submission. Although this is not a new pedagogic technique,
there is a lack of research on many aspects of student annotation
behavior, particularly of second language writers. In this project,
student annotations were analyzed for the areas of writing about which
students annotate and for the distribution of positive annotations and
expressions of concern. Annotations were made by NNSs and NSs on their own
research papers. There were some differences between the two groups of
students in the categories and sub-categories of their annotations. The
value for both students and writing instructors of encouraging L2 writers
to annotate their work is discussed, and areas for further research are
noted.
Writing Instruction at
the German Gymnasium: A 13th-Grade English Class Writes the Abitur
MELINDA REICHELT
University of Toledo
The field of contrastive
rhetoric has until fairly recently focused for the most part on the
features of texts written by writers composing in English as a second
language in English-speaking environments. Current research in contrastive
rhetoric, however, points to interest in broader concerns, including
inquiry into the educational contexts around the world in which writing
and writing instruction take place. This article reports on an
investigation of the context of writing at a secondary school (Gymnasium)
in Germany. In addition to reporting contextual information related to the
Gymnasium and the Abitur, an exit exam required by all Gymnasiums in
Germany, this article reports the responses to the English section of the
Abitur of 13th-grade students who elected English as one of their Abitur
subjects. Students' responses are reported concerning their perception of
the purpose of this exam; their means of preparing for it; their
expectations of it before taking it and their reactions to it afterwards;
their descriptions of their writing process during the exam; and their
perceptions of the differences between writing in a first language and
writing in a second language.
Critical Thinking in ESL:
An Argument for Sustained Content
MARCIA PALLY
City University of New York
This article suggests that
in adult ESL learners, development of critical thinking skills, as defined
by EAP, cognitive psychology and transformative pedagogy, benefits from
sustained content study (or studying one area over time). Sustained
content study is recommended because: it allows students to accrue
information, without which they are less able to question, synthesize, and
evaluate what they read; it allows students to become familiar with the
rhetorical conventions of a discipline; and, as these are the skills
needed for university study, today's workplace and to understand the
socio-political factors that affect students' lives, sustained study
allows students to practice in the ESL class what they will need outside
it. This article: defines critical thinking, discusses who should learn it
and why, reviews the role of content in ESL and the literature supporting
sustained study, and discusses content that engages ESL students with
varied majors and goals. Three courses are described, one on selected
economic/political issues, one on language acquisition itself, and one on
film and society. Selections from student discussion and writing are
examined.
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